Smriti



Note: Read in Hindi
Mere dil ki galiyo mein
Man ke samundar mein
Mastishq k tufaano mein
Sharir ki chetana mein
Jivan ki is pagdandi pe
Vicharo ke in mausan mein
In saanso ke kan-kan mein
In batoon mei har kshan mein
Dhoondhti hu ateet se nikal
Bhavishya mein jaakar
Aur phir is vartamaan ki
Parvah na karte hue
In smritiyon mein
khoyi hui smriti
Subah se ho jaati hai shaam
Aur phir aati hai ek nayi subah
Hafte, mahine, varsh;
ksan-bhar mei beet jate hain sab
Aur meri khooj
Aur gehan ho jaati hai
Parantu phir bhi khoje nahi
Milti wo smriti
Aur phir kisi aahat se
Ya kisi chillahat se
Dhyan-bhang ho jaata hai jab
Tab maluum padta hai ki
Smritiyon mein kho gayi thi mein
Dhoondh rahi thi khud ko
Aur phir vah pal
Ban jaata hai ek smriti
Jab-jab vah chetna
Vyapak ho uthti hai
Tab-tab ehsas hota hai
Jaane kahan kho gayi hoon
In smritiyon mein
MAIN KHUD SMRITI :)

P.S: This poem got me 2nd prize at the inter-college 'Swarachit Kavita' comptetion in Lucknow.

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8 comments:

  1. Anurag Pratap Singh 'MEGHRAJ'March 26, 2012 at 4:42 AM

    Loved your words...keep it up. Try writing in Devanagari script next time, it always helps reader.

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    1. AnonymousApril 9, 2012 at 5:55 PM

      try n use understandable hindi..
      nid not to use itni vishudh wali hindi unnecessarily...

      waise twaz quite an elating work by an amateur...

      hope u wont take it personally...!!

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    2. SmritiApril 9, 2012 at 10:06 PM

      Thanks, Anurag! Actually I usually write and publisg stuff from my blackberry. And, sadly it doesn't support Devangiri script. :/

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    3. SmritiApril 9, 2012 at 10:09 PM

      Mr. Anonymous, I wrote it when I was 14..so, it doesn't has 'that' perfection or proper use of words but, I prefer to keep it the authentic way! :)

      I noted your points..will definitely try to implement them. :)

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  2. AnonymousApril 10, 2012 at 12:38 PM

    oops..i neva saw dat dis iz ur age 14 creation..

    waise i did appreciate it ....!!

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  3. MadhureshOctober 29, 2012 at 10:12 AM

    Beautiful poem...
    I had written on 'Smriti' a while ago in a national daily 'Bhaskar' ..thought of sharing a few lines here..

    Sochun toh sabkuchh hai mann mein
    kitni gehri santripti hai..
    bas neh bhara hi mann mera,
    praarabdh hai, smriti hai..


    I really enjoyed visiting your blog.. keep writing, painting, sketching... my best regards!

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    1. SmritiOctober 29, 2012 at 9:23 PM

      WOW! I love it! You write well! (y)

      Thanks for the wishes, glad you liked it! :)1

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    2. MadhureshNovember 4, 2012 at 9:27 PM

      Hey Smriti, thought of sharing the full published version, the first in this list: http://madhushaalaa-sumit.blogspot.com/p/invited-published-poems.html
      keep writing!! :)

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